Wednesday, October 21, 2009

Writing Styles Passage

"Ah love, let us be true
To one another! for the world, which seems
To lie before us like a land of dreams,
So various, so beautiful, so new,
Hath really neither joy, nor love, nor light,
Nor certitude, nor peace, nor help for pain;
And we are here as on a darkling plain
Swept with confused alarms of struggle and flight,
Where ignorant armies clash by night."

page 100

Saturday, October 3, 2009

Activity 6

1. The patient, ________ravaged___________ (ravage) by the effects of diabe-

tes, was a candidate for a kidney transplant.

2. The disease was _________ravaging____________ (ravage) the kidneys of

the cat.

3. The ________drooping____________ (droop) cat was held in the arms of her

owner.


4. The cat _______drooped_____________ (droop) as the owner handed her

to the veterinarian.

Activity 6

(Continued)



4. The cat ________drooped____________ (droop) as the owner handed her

to the veterinarian.

5. ________Bewildered___________, (bewilder) Shawn Levering looked around

the veterinary hospital.

6. He was given a _______bewildered ____________ (bewilder) number of

choices.

7. The veterinarian made a ______compeling___________ (compel) argument

for saving Lady’s life.

8. He was _______compeled_____________ (compel) to choose between his

hot rods and his cat.

9. The ________transplanted____________ (transplant) kidney was working fi ne.

10. The surgeon had _________transplanted_____________ (transplant) the kidney

the night before.

Activity 9

Reread the fi rst paragraph of Part 1.

What words does Bilger use to compare Lady to a movie star? Why does he make this comparison?


Bilger uses the words "queen of silent film with one last swoon left in her".


• Now read the second paragraph.

What words does Bilger use to describe Shawn Levering? What point is Bilger making about Shawn?


Bilger uses "scuffed blue jeans, freckled and ruddy his forearms thickly cabled", as some words to describe Shawn. He is making a point that Shawn is a well put together man, and knows what he is doing.


• Now read the third paragraph.

Identify the medical terminology in this paragraph. Why does Bilger use it?


He uses words like toxin, dialysis, blood pressure and clotting and uses these words to show the real world aspects of life.

• What do Lady, Shawn Levering, and Cathy Langston represent?

What problem or issue do the fi rst three paragraphs suggest that

“The Last Meow” is going to explore?

The first three paragraphs issues are how much a family will spend for the lives of their pets.




Look at the fi rst paragraph of Part 2.

Each sentence is quite long except the last. What is the effect of ending the paragraph with,

“The ferrets are called Larry, Mo, and Curly”?


The effect was that the info wasn't very important.

• What is the purpose of the parentheses in the third sentence?



It's purpose of the parentheses are for extra information

• Why does Bilger give us a long list of examples of animals treated

in the exotics unit?


To show that the treatment has been experienced with different animals.


How are the paragraphs in this article different from paragraphs

in a newspaper article?


They are longer and have more of a personal expreience rather than a business experience.




Why has Bilger divided the article into sections?

The article was too long, so it needed to be divided.


• What is the tone of “The Last Meow”?

The tone of "The Last Meow" is normal, with no up or downs.


• How would the article be different if it were a newspaper article?

What if it were in a textbook for students of veterinary medicine?

I don't believe the article would change either way.


Embedded quotes

The Crucible by Arthur Miller is about people being accused of witchcraft and being hanged) as punishment. This book has many themes throughout the story, but one theme that is repeated is reputation. Salem community reputation is very important to them because they felt that they needed to be accepted by society in order to have a successful life. But, many do everything to uphold their name. Some of the characters in the book take

it to extremes, like Reverend Parris, John Proctor and Abigail Williams. Be a little more

specific; what do you mean by extremes?

Reverend Parris is one of the great examples exhibiting the theme. "Let him look to

medicine and put out all of thought of unnatural cause here. There be none.", page 38 this is an

example on his opinion about "normal". Why is he so afraid of unnatural causes? He

wants to protect his reputation. He is so fixed on having the perfect life and to live up to

that he is willing to sacrifice the love from his family. Parris doesn't want to let anyone

see him weak, and vote him out of Minister of Salem, he already has the respect and

dignity of the townspeople slipping, and to let them learn of his mistakes and secrets

would taint his good name. Reverend will try anything to become "normal" in the eyes of

Salem. Good analysis.

The second character John Proctor shows the biggest sacrifice for his "good name".

"God in Heaven, what is John Proctor, what is John Proctor? ... I think it is honest, I think so;

I am no saint. ... let Rebecca go like a saint; for me it is a fraud!" (138)., this is the part in the book where John sacrifices his

life to let his name be cleared and be kept good from his past mistakes. Proctor was a

gentle and good man, but he committed adultery, and his mistress is running around Salem telling their tale. Instead of living and have his name tainted, he decides to be

hung hanged to clear his name, and his children, and be known as a good man, rather

than an adulterer.

The final character Abigail Williams has a love affair with a married man, John

Proctor, but that isn't the only thing that is known about her; she is a liar and

manipulates people throughout the town. She finally hears rumors about herself from

Proctor's wife, " My name is good in the village! I will not have it said my name is

soiled". pg 75. From this she starts manipulates her situation and tries to clear her name,

blaming it on witchcraft. Clearly Abigail is trying to keep her name out of all the rumors

and get the respect from her fellow peers again.

In conclusion, reputation was a big part of the Salem society. Many people risk and

sacrifices greatly to keep there good name. Even now in the 21st century there are

many out there willing to do anything for the acceptation of peers and to have the best,

or "coolest" reputation.

Roots

Many come and many go

Sometimes on pedals or portable go go’s

They always leave something signiture

Maybe a diction, action, something audio or even spectacal

Either way leaving the poplar crowd motivated

Revolved around different locations

Friday, October 2, 2009

Love<3

I was once in once in love. The problem is I hurt her to much. I always fought with her constantly breaking up with her, and yes it is a girl. She was my first for everything, my first love. I regret treating her that way. I never truely regained her affection. She is currently with another girl, and happily in love. I tried so much is get her back, but now I just